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the story of an invisible girl
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Balloon Man
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thatguychuck From: thatguychuck Date: March 14th, 2005 10:02 pm (UTC) (Link)
I agree with what several others shared; that was beautiful.

I have a sad sort of smile when my mind's eye sees the man light up and change when he realizes that he can be "the clown" and help bring a little light to a young girl.

The story doesn't bring me despair, but instead, a sad sort of happiness. It's sad seeing someone having a bad time with life, but it's nice to know that even under all the sadness there's something that brings him joy.

I know that your vision of the balloon man will be differnt, and that his reaction different from what I saw. Every bit of writing is different to every reader, and I really enjoyed this one.

Thank you.
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